Monday, 2 November 2020

Crit Feedback


- I NEED to relate the layout design to the rules themselves e.g. 'Approach your subject close up' being zoomed in, cropped etc. This will give the layout more meaning and push the narrative of the publication forward. 

- Pretorian is a good choice of typeface for the front cover, but perhaps not for the headings within the publication as it is so decorative. I need to find something that still fits the tone of voice, but is slightly more subtle. Beginning to think about this, I went back to look at one of the existing publications I referenced at the start of the project - Things You Know by Max Friedman and Jamil McGinnis. This publication utilises a number of beautiful typefaces that all work wonderfully in conjunction with one another. I think that type is one of my downfalls and is something that I wish to improve on - I am not very confident in my ability to pair typefaces together and am nervous to do so within the publication. However, being inspired by Things You Know, I will experiment with a range of different pairings to find the right one.




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